JohnnyJames

Donny,

I must say I am impressed. And I mean that, no bullshit.

You are improving with each of the last 10 or so posts.

You are using spellcheck or a grammar workbook, and I can see the results.

I must point out, now that you have stopped using exclamation points after every third word or so, the value of hitting the RETURN key.

People do NOT like to read a giant blob of text all together. I am serious about this. You may well have a point, and you may well be correct in that point. But, no one will ever know if you keep posting these massive globs of letters with no break.

The internet is a wonderful tool for exposing fools, but most of the people reading what we (you) write will not sit through what looks like homework, so use the ENTER button sometimes.

Most people use it as a break. When you stop for a second, hit the ENTER button. When you are changing directions with your thoughts, use the ENTER button.

It makes people really consider what you have to say.

I am not critical of what you have written at all. I do not know you or Joe. But I do know that your presentation skills are vastly better than they were at the beginning of the "Are these Asian Chicks pussies Tight" thread.

You may well have something that should be exposed with AMA Joe. And you may not. But if you can at least present a logical and well-spoken argument from your perspective, you won't have the trolls coming into your threads to suck your blood while you make your point.

Good job on the fast improvements, and I look forward to your next, and future moves.

In the next lesson we will discuss commas.

Best wishe!