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euphoriacash
I'd just like to say you take criticism like a fucking pro man... There was a lot of beat down in this thread and you've maintained a positive attitude and are working in the right direction. Thumbs up on being a fucking champ :D
That said...
Someone earlier recommended changing from Times New Roman as the font. You should DEFINITELY make the switch to something else... Arial or if you want to keep with serif fonts try out Georgia or something :P
On the new links you posted I think Tour1 (Also your fav) is moving in the right direction.
Here's a couple of things you could do to bring the design a little more up to date but keeping it still "amateur"
- Add a repeating background, very tasteful and very toned down
- Try changing up the color on the title images you're using, something complimentary that stands out but isn't obnoxious... specifically on your calls to action
- Never skew a photo (like the one of deb at the top left of the content area in tour1... she looks squished
- Try out some different content separators...
- Don't center all of your verbiage, that will help block out areas better and keep it looking a bit "cleaner"
- Try blocking out different content areas or "blocks" with a different back ground color (nothing too drastic) or perhaps even some very light borders
- The follow me on twitter link... make the entire box the link rather than just the word "Twitter"
Anyway, there's a few suggestions on things you could try out, hope that helps!
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