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Originally Posted by AsianDivaGirlsWebDude
Hate to be a pessimist, but in light of recent history, your splash page could give one a cause to pause:
ADG |
Jesus. What dreadful copy!
"Hi, we're shit at launching something, but when we get there, it will be GREAT! HONEST! Please give me your money."
I would have gone for something like:
"Some things take a little longer than expected"
And have a pic of the Empire State building, or pioneers going across Nevada etc.
"We know that trust is the most important aspect of who you choose to bank with, which is why we decided to delay the launch of our new product. We needed to more the most testing possible, set the highest standards, meet and pass all guidelines, so we gave ourselves an extra month to make sure we hit the ground running. Come see us at XBiz LA etc"
or just
"We know that you trust people face to face best when it comes to money. So we decided to move our launch to coincide with XBizLA so we could meet as many of you as possible."
anything would be better than what is there now imho!