You been writing for three months !!!!
I would suggest you look at one of these films first...
The Max Candy one, if written at all, would have taken 30 minutes.
Girls run around, Boy fucks girl, girl fucks girl, girl drives tank, lots of boys fuck lots of girls...
Fade roll credits...
You got one thing right, you call your script "awesome" don't let reality or any objective opinion cloud the issue.
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