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Old 09-10-2012, 06:01 AM  
davethedope
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"Sometimes shy, sometimes exhuberant, always hot and horny!"

That's not a sentence. It works, but why not just throw in "they're always hot and horny."

"Hot and horny" is redundant, but whatever.

Also, "exhuberant"- that's the kind of word a non-native English speaker uses- you also misspelled it too.

The sentance altogether needs to be reworked, because exuberance is not the antonym to shyness.
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