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everyone here has given you good advice, which is nice, GFY doesn't usually work that way, but I'll add a few smaller points, because a site like this does have a chance, provided you are already covering the other areas.
a large portion of our customers are impulse buyers, they just saw a Shakira video on TV and it gave them a boner, or they were at the bar and some hot chicks boob fell out and they can't get it off their mind, they want a fix and they want it now. When I surf peoples sites, i try to put myself in that mentality because it is a huge group of consumers, and when I got to your site my dick got soft, cause text just isn't sexy.
Now, there is another group of consumers that would be willing to read your text, and I believe that Roald actually knows about them as much as anyone, and millions of them frequent his site, they are the more educated and more experienced fanatics. They will read text, they would likely prefer to see a little more picture and video content, but they will read the text to see what they are going to get and what your site is about, the issue here is that to convert those guys, your site functionality has to be perfect.
I just took a quick look, but I saw several issues that an experienced surfer, who doesn't have a boner yet, would also see, as they have joined sites before, often many.
1) you have a massive Adult Centro logo at the bottom of your pages. I like adult centro, I use them, Stans's always been good to me, but a ton of people use them, and i mean a ton, so many experienced surfers have had a membership to adult centro feed, or stand alone site, and won't join yours when it costs more. (I offer those same 10,000 dvd's for a quarter the price).
2) You mention a whole bunch of stuff about exclusives, "exclusive dvd's shot just for this site", "Exclusive content not released to the general public" in that list of items, (even if you are being totally honest) I only believe #1 and #2, and I am pretty sure a surfer would believe the same (powered by adult centro, but somehow exclusive to you and you alone?)
3) The more experienced surfers will actually want to see your terms of service, you don't have any, you have the words terms of service, but they are not linked.
4) They will actually check out the bonus sites you say they will get access to, but TeenChub.com, which is listed as a bonus site, and linked to, is parked with GoDaddy.
5) More experienced surfers know that PayPal is anti adult, but you are offering paypal memberships, so they know you are processing illegally and likely scamming them.
6) your asking for $25 for a one day pass, and $30 for a monthly recurring, this is like printing the following statement on your site "if you get a one day pass, you never coming back, I have no confidence that you will like my product, so I have to get at least $25 before I will let you see what I have, but if you agree to let me charge your credit card repeatedly, I will only charge you 4% as much, as that is what it is worth".
7) you have an intermediary join page in between your primary join page and your credit card processes, this page looks more scammy than any of the others, I would never proceed past that, on the previous page, I chose my join option, now on this one you listed all 10 options again, in a confusing order with prices anywhere from $25 to $1000.
8) experienced Surfers know that no legit adult processor will allow you to charge $1000 for anything unless it is cam credits and you have been verified will.
red flags all over
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