My new presentation site - pls comment and criticize
 

I am no experienced web developer so any input welcome , no need to be nice - really.
The site should be just presentation of the company and communication with new affiliates.
- don't look at text and English at all - still have to pass it to native speaker for correction

THNX:thumbsup

www.doktorbio.biz

Looking good, thought it will be hell by your intro :)

congrats dude!

:1orglaugh ok man thnx anyway
Do you think that slideshow could be trouble? After few options made I have choose slideshow but I am not sure

nice work dude

yeap thnx :pimp

Looks tight :pimp ...

It looks good. Let us know if we can help promote your websites

Have a nice day,
~Ray
www.hardlinks.org

I would find a way to fill some of the white space on the right.

wanted the result to be very plain and simple but true is that there might be too much of white space - thnx for input will think of it

Looking VERY good! The Flash banner is nice but may cause some issues with mobile devices. Overall it loos really great!! Good luck with it. :)

THNX MAN :thumbsup

Looks really good, keep it up :thumbsup:thumbsup:thumbsup

Thnx mate - I am sure you can see the next job for you there - will need German translation and gonna contact you soon with details :pimp

Sounds great :winkwink:

Party on! Looks nice & clean.

Awesome site designs

thank you - wanted to make it really clean and simple:thumbsup

nice and clean! Congrats

Not bad at all :thumbsup

I slowly start to believe that I made it right - thank all of you guys :thumbsup

Nice work man, congrats... :)

thank you guys:thumbsup

The design is good but just landing on that page does not tell me much. I had to search to find out what you guys are about. Might want to look into that

In my opinion everything looks good and clear but when I enter website for the first time I don't know what's the main subject of it.

Bingo, the average user has an attention span of a fruit fly. I took more than a minute to check your site out and I'm still not sure what you are selling there - food supplements, web design, something else???

very good point guys - thnx
supposed that our sites and products could tell that clearly but looking at it now U R right - thnx very valuable input :thumbsup