Building my 1st webpage- how did I do?
 

Hey everyone, I've built my first 'REAL' web page, featuring my AllXDoll buisness (linked market to AllXCLUB)

And i was wondering if I could some honest opinions on my page?

I've been practicing building @ www.fukcdollsfavorites.com if you wanna see a bit more of me and who I am?
Free pix and vids there too!

But the page I'd like you to rate the most is @ www.AllXDoll.com

favorites is just more for learning and fun- lol

Any input on AllXDoll would be greatly apriciated

Thnx

looking nice..

thnx

It's a work in progress

*wink*

Would you cahnge anything B4 promo?

I want it took look good!!!!

Love the use of Welcum in place of Welcome but I did notice that Performing is mispelled Preformance at the bottom. Other than that, looks great!

doesn't work here... in ff3

Add some more colour perhaps?
I first thought it was a parked page, because of the style of layout and colour ;)

Star with blogs..make some money and then you can work...


If you need any help, feel free to hit up me on ICQ

And check my si ofcours :)

DOH!

I'm a horrible speller
thnx for the input- I'll make some corrections and adjustments soon- so feel free to checkit out in a day or so and re comment

I apreciate all the help I can get

Very bland, I would look more at the colors and so forth but ya not bad for first time.

A bit hard to navigate. A lot of room for improvement on the design... but not bad for a 1st time.

Nice start, I like the 'cumming soon' statement :)

not bad :)

looks good